Chloe’s Creative Writing
Tuesday, October 11th, 2016
Dear Future Chloe,
I want to have less messy hand writing. I think it’s good because people can actually read it. Awesome, right! And to add punctuation because in 3rd grade, you (you not me) had trouble with it, and you want to become better. Also proof read(.) you have to do this cause it might have so much mistakes you’ll get bad grades. Don’t rush bad things will happened.
From Past/Present
Chloe
Bar
“I woke up in the dim room of my hotel. I stretched my aching muscles after a long night. I washed up and awakened my groggy comrades. Later we stepped out into the clean crisp Maine air, the wind blowing the salty smell of the ocean. A soft breeze blew my hair in my face. The sun shone rays of golden color, birds tweeting their soft sweet song. There was islands near Bar harbor ( Bar Island, Sheep, Porcupine Island and Bald Porcupine Island). In that heavenly morning, the tide changed marking a path to Bar Islands. Rocks glistened in the sun. We raced to the path way. We raced among rocks overjoyed we explored puddles, snails were everywhere, tiny crabs were as white as snow. I found a huge crab shell colors like
a rainbow. Rocks of every color barnacles sticking to everything. The water was blue beautiful fresh clean water. I did not realize that we reached Bar island when we went in the emerald green trees beautiful birds singing then we went to the top. A breathtaking view of Bar harbor! It was lovely.”
Shane
“Come on Chloe get the belt hurry up” exclaimed by brother Shane. “Okay okay” I replied. I hurried up to my brother’s room took his belt and rushed down tho the kitchen/dinning room. He opened the window. I took the chair and dragged it near the window. “wait Shane, I need to tie it first. Don’t jump out the window yet.” “Okay fine then hurry up” So I tied the belt to the chain and threw the rest of the belt out the window. Then Shane sat on the window sill and … Jumped.
Just kidding. My grandpa stopped us and that was the end of that.
